The first and only time I have gone scuba diving was in Cozumel, Mexico. It is an island off the cost of Yucatan, Mexico. Cozumel is one of the best places to go scuba diving in Mexico because there is a lot of sea life there and the water is crystal blue. The only bad thing that we didn't have an advantage on was that it was a very windy day so the water was moving very fast. Another cool thing is that we got to see a sea turtle. It was beautiful! We saw how it ate the plants and how it swam. Also we saw a lot of schools of colorful fish swimming beside us like if we were not there. I would really want to do it again because you are literally going into another wonderful world.

I LIKE THE TOPIC YOU WROTE ABOUT ESPECIALLY BECAUSE I HAVE GONE SCUBA DIVING TOO. I ENJOYED HOW YOU TALKED ABOUT WHAT YOU SAW IN THE OCEAN. YOU COULD WORK MORE IN IS ALSO LETTING THE READER KNOW HOW THE WATER FEELS LIKE COLD, WARM, SMOOTH ETC…I ALSO ENJOYED THE PICTURE YOU ADDED BECAUSE IT SHOWS HOW MUCH FUN YOU HAD.
ResponderEliminarI have never gone scuba diving, but it looks like fun! I think that you described it really well.I could really imagine your whole adventure. You should also add a little more like if you got seasick or something. But I am glad you had could explain your experience to us!
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